traffic – – haiku

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traffic train

the pushy speeder

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My name is Janice.  I started blogging as Ontheland when I moved from Toronto to a rural area near Kingston, Ontario in Canada.  Over time I have found myself writing poetry, mostly in Japanese forms, such as haiku and haibun.  One of my deepest interests is the natural world: the joy of it and how we can look after it better.

2 thoughts on “traffic – – haiku”

    1. Thank you Denis. For me the strongest aspect of this was the traffic train…a sensation of being in motion as part of something larger than my vehicle consisting of a line of cars held together as one unit.

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